We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).
St Pius X feast moment in time
I heard deliteful singing in the mass and I heard people chatting about the delicious cake.
I saw young and big people cutting the outrageous cake.
I felt hungry because the cake tasted so lovely I wanted all of it, I felt yucky inside because when I tasted the top of the cake it tasted like dishwashing liquid.
I wondered why the top of the cake tasted like dishwashing liquid.
Today we had to write about our personal experience about the St Pius X feast day.
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