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Friday, September 28, 2018

Moment in time jubilee mass

LEARNING GOAL - We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).


Moment in time jubilee mass

I heard a rude lady shouting when we had a vow of silence for Huni.

I saw fantastic dancing by the cultural groups.

I felt so pleasant and joyful when I saw my cheerful family and especially when my cute baby sister started waving and pointing at me.

I wondered if the crowd could hear me because I have a very silent voice.

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